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读后续写考前磨之友情类（细节处理写作技巧：情绪+动作）
友情类故事构造“三步法”
第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）
1、内疚
1.Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）,Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad,“I found it over there,and I think it is yours.”
2.Murmuring in a low voice,he dodged Asad’s shining eyes,somehow even not daring to look into them.
3.She now could do nothing but feel the regret（内疚）burning in her heart.
2、困难与帮助
1.Not knowing what to do,he just accompanied her on the bench silently.
2.“The best thing you can do for Ashley is to treat her with kindness and sympathy.”
3.When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley,she saw tears well up in Ashley’s eyes.
3、破裂
1.I broke down in front of her.She apologized.But I felt cheated on.I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further.We both missed each other.But neither of us wanted to give the last try.
2.During the trip,we intentionally（有意）avoided each other.However,I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same.
第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）
1、原谅/和好
1.Blushed,she broke the silence,“I am sorry again.I didn’t mean to hurt you.”Tears streaming down,she continued,“I should have talked to you earlier.”I stood up and reached out to hug her,“I am sorry,too.I should have been more generous.”
2.But deep down,we both know all the argument is just about helping us to grow into a better individual（个体)instead of enemies.大学活动策划书
3.Therefore,we both learned to be tolerant（忍耐)and brave enough to always forgive.
2、开心描写
1.I’m thrilled to know that we’ll have dinner together.
2.Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin（大笑）from ear to ear.
3.I’m buzzing（激动不已）for the dinner.Imagine,we’re going to drink freely at the airport.
第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）
1.It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school,and he truly reckoned the value of sincerity and honesty（明白真诚和诚实的价值)in a relationship.
2.2.So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said,“Luke,that was such a wonderful thing you did for me.Thank you.”
3.It dawned on me that one loyal（忠诚的）friend is worth ten thousand relatives.
4.If we really value our friends and friendship,always cherish their presence and show willingness to
maintain and nurture（培养）the relationship
例文1朋友和解
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“Want to go to the pool tomorrow?”Rosa asked Stephanie during recess.The pool at the YMCA was one of their favorite places,where they learnt and practiced swimming.
Rosa and Stephanie did everything together.They rode the school bus together.They sat together during lunch.They took dance lessons together and they even went to the same summer camp.Their classmates called them“twins”.They were best friends.Most of the time.
Sometimes,though,when Stephanie was with other friends,she ignored Rosa or treated her like a little kid,even though they were the same age.Rosa and Stephanie had played together since they were babies,but sometimes Stephanie didn't act like a friend.
Today was one of those times.
“Sorry.I’m already going to the pool,”Stephanie said.“Toni and Vanessa and I are going.”She gave a broad smile,but in Rosa’s eyes,it wasn’t her nice smile.Saying nothing more,she walked straight away to join Toni and Vanessa,and Rosa was left standing alone,with her face burned and an angry tension coming into her limbs.
After school,at dance class,Stephanie talked and giggled with the other dancers as they stretched in front of the mirror.When Rosa came in,Stephanie didn’t say hello to her,but just another smile.Rosa hesitated for a while about whether she should join them,but she still felt too upset.
Then she noticed Kiara,the new girl.Rosa joined her and began stretching,too.Kiara smiled and Rosa smiled back.The two girls began to talk.Rosa discovered that Kiara was not the quiet girl she had thought she was.Kiara talked a lot—about her little brother,about the tree house her uncle had built and even about swimming.“I love swimming,”Kiara said.“I will hold a pool part at the YMCA.Would you like to come?”“Yes.It’s awesome.”Rosa responded.She tried not to check the mirror to see if Stephanie had noticed.She hoped Stephanie felt left out.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After the dance class,when Rosa boarded the bus,Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat.____ When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits,her heart sank._________________________________【故事梗概】
小栗旬结婚
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rosa和Stephanie是从小到大的好朋友，但有时Stephanie 表现得不像朋友，有一天Rosa问Stephanie要不要一起去基督教青年会的游泳池游泳，Stephanie说她去过了就不去了，这让Rosa很尴尬；之后在舞蹈课上Rosa结识了新来的女孩Kiara，Rosa邀请Kiara一起去游泳，想以此来报复Stephanie。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句After the dance class,when Rosa boarded the bus,Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat.可知，第一段可描写Stephanie为Rosa腾位置，但为了报复，Rosa并未坐在Stephanie身旁，而是与Kiara坐在了一起，Stephanie问Rosa还去不去游泳，Rosa说她和Kiara一起去，Stephanie很失落。灭蚊子
②由第二段首句When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits,her heart sank.可知，第二段可描写看到失
落的Stephanie，Rosa并没有报复的快感，Rosa邀请Stephanie一起去游泳，最后两个女孩和解，露出美丽的笑容。
邓伦的行程2.续写线索：座位——问话——失落——释然——和好——笑容
1斤等于多少千克Possible Version
After the dance lesson,when Rosa boarded the bus,Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat. Seeing Rosa,Stephanie swiftly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her.But Rosa walked past and slid into the empty seat next to Kiara.They were talking about the pool party when Stephanie went over.“Do you still want to go swimming tonight?”Stephanie asked.“I’m already going,”she said without looking up.“Kiara and I are going together.”Rosa smiled. Stephanie nodded and looked at her feet.
When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits,her heart sank.Getting even didn’t feel the way she had expected.She could walk away with her new friend and not look back.But when she saw Stephanie's watery eyes,her heart beat painfully."Maybe we could all go together.”Rosa said. Stephanie’s face lit up.“I’m sorry for ignoring you.Thank you for your tolerance.”Stephanie said. Rosa gave her a hug and said,“I was too sensitive.Thank you for your tolerance,too.”The two girls smiled at each other,whi
ch was their nice smile.
例文2结交新朋友
Lily was cleaning windows,and it was what she must do for her family's new Chinese restaurant.Everything had to be absolutely perfect:unique decorations,skillful employees,and delicious traditional food.Then customers would love the place,making the business a success.
Lily's family had just moved here from San Francisco,having bought a small restaurant, which was opened yesterday.She was new in the neighbor and had few friends.The first few days at her new school hadn't been easy,either.She found it hard to talk to people she didn't know and
it seemed like the students hadn't even noticed her.She was eager for a friendship,though.
Lily shifted her vision to look outside the restaurant as a girl about her age,with abundant red hair,walked up the street.The girl paused to study the sign announcing their opening and then looked directly at Lily with a friendly smile.Lily smiled back shyly and lifted a hand,accidentally waving with the cleaning cloth.The girl smiled at her amusement and waved back happily.
Lily hesitated,not accustomed to starting friendship,but she felt courageous,so she opened the door."
Hello,"she said,adding the first thing that entered her head,“do you like Chinese food?”
“I don't know,but I like to try new things,"the girl remarked,and then she introduced herself as Gabriela.
Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden idea.______________ The following day,Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard an unexpected knock._______________________________________________________________________【分析】
续写应该围绕“陌生地的新友情”这一主题展开，需要充分挖掘文本中提供的信息，如中国餐馆、文化背景、Lily个性特点等，把握主人公情感的需求和变化。一次偶然的邂逅通过何种方式发展成为二次见面，由此带给女主人公什么样的感受，这是续写的落脚点。续写部分需要对话的支撑，但更需注重表情神态、心理活动等描写。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①第一段首句内容Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden idea.可知，第一段可描写Lily想办法与Gabriela建立谈话的过程。
②由第二段首句内容The following day,Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard an unexpected knock.可知，第二段可描写Gabriela再一次来访的目的，Lily成功地交到了朋友，且心理得到了满足和宽慰。
2.续写线索：取饼干——赠送——盼望、等待——反馈礼物——感悟
Possible Version
Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden idea.She ran into the kitchen and came back with a small package.“Some Chinese candy for you to try,”she explained.“If you enjoy it,I hope you’ll return and tell me.”“Excellent,I’ll see you around soon.”Gabriela headed down the street,glancing back with a cheerful wave.Lily spent the remaining afternoon hoping Gabriela really would return and not think Lily’s gift was strange.
The following day,Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard unexpected knocking.It was Gabriela with a plate covered with plastic wrap.Lily grinned with enthusiasm and opened the door with an excited greeting.Gabriela presented the plate and said,“I brought biscuits made from my grandmother’s recipe to thank you for the delicious candy.”“Come in,and we can have some biscuits right now,”Lily stammered,happy inside.Lily was now positive that the restaurant would make a wond
rous impression on the customers and that she was going to enjoy life here immensely.
读后续写考前磨之亲情类（细节处理写作技巧：情绪+动作）
亲情类故事构造“三步法”
第一步：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）
1、生气
1.My mother glanced at me.Something she never did before I had a stepfamily.“You could have picked it up.”（本可以，虚拟语气）she said.“That would have been the kind thing to do.”
滴水穿石的下一句
2.He folded his fist angrily,but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly.
3.Jackson kept saying something,but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word.（倒装，对比，夸张）
2、后悔
1.I realized how poorly I tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings.I should have asked mo
m for help.（虚拟语气）
3、内疚
1.Thinking about what I had done to him,regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides.
2.Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book,my face turned red.
4、烦恼
Watching Shirley’s smile fading away,Peter frowned.
5、伤心
Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister.（比喻）
6、犯错
1.To cover his terrible action,the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.
2.Fearing punishment,the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried.
3.Glancing at the chocolates with hesitation,the boy timidly raised his head before his mother.第二步：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）
1、道歉
1.“I’m so sorry.”he said,gently petting Jackson’s head.
2.He put down his hand,glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.
3.To her surprise,she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness as well as my difficulty with English communication.
2、原谅
1.His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study.