读后续写(新高考专用)
模拟题 05
1.(2022·山东济南·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ella’s First Fashion Creation
Ella was wearing a new dress and she felt like a famous model, Even better, it was a dress she made! Her very first piece of fashion!
含气量“What do you think?” she asked her family. They were all gathered at the kitchen table for breakfast. “It’s very pretty. I can’t believe you designed and sewed that all by yourself!” Mom said.“I’m so proud of you! How long did that take?”Dad asked. Ella pulled out her chair and sat down.“Two weeks! But I think I could make the next one faster. I had a few problems.
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Ella smiled. She had so many problems making the dress, but right now it was all worth it. It was going to be a great day.
The kids at school weren’t quite as excited about her dress as she thought they would be, but she did get some nice comments from some of the girls, so she was happy about that. The day went by quickly, and before she knew it, she was outside for the last break of the day. What a perfect day, she thought to herself as she swung on the swings.
The school bell rang and the break was over. When the swing was close to stopping, Ella jumped off. When she landed, she heard a loud rip (撕裂). She moved her hand to the back of her dress. It was ripped all the way down the back! Her very first fashion creation fell apart! Ella was so embarrassed.
Ella spotted her teacher, Miss Miller, near the door. Ella took one hand from her dress and waved for Miss Miller to come to her. Miss Miller came up and looked at the back of Ella’s dress.“Oh no! And it is such a beautiful dress!” “I made it myself,” Ella said. “You must be very proud! You did a great job!” “Not really. Or it wouldn’t have ripped.” “Well, th
at happens sometimes. Even with clothes you buy in the store!”
什么小生意最赚钱注意:
1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
暂缓回京范围有哪些Miss Miller took off her sweater and helped Ella to pull it on.
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“We can’t avoid problems,” said Mom.
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参考答案:
Miss Miller took off her sweater and helped Ella to pull it on. She helped Ella up and walked her back to the classroom. As soon as she sat down, she heard a girl laughing at
her torn clothes. Ella was very sad and felt very defeated. Miss Miller came to Ella and said, "Your clothes are very beautiful. You shouldn't deny yourself because it is broken.". After hearing this, Ella called her mother and asked her mother to pick her up. Because her clothes were broken, she couldn't walk home by herself. When her mother came, she saw what had happened and was distressed.
“We can’t avoid problems,” said Mom. “When the problem arises, we should find a way to solve the problem instead of complaining about ourselves. Now your dress is broken and you just need to sew it”. After saying that, mother took out the sewing bag and handed it to Ella, who took over the sewing bag and nodded to her mother. Then she stitched up the broken part of the dress.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了艾拉自己设计制作了一条裙子,家里人都夸漂亮,她把裙子穿到了学校,从秋千上下来的时候,她的裙子破了,她叫来了米勒小来帮她。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“米勒小脱下毛衣,帮埃拉穿上。”可知,第一段可描写米勒小带艾拉回教室并安慰她。
梁静茹实际身高>明年今日歌词②由第二段首句内容““我们无法避免问题,”妈妈说。”可知,第二段可描写艾拉的妈妈鼓励艾拉解决问题。
2.续写线索:回教室——安慰——叫来妈妈——妈妈鼓励——缝好
3.词汇激活
行为类
①坐下:sit down/be seated
②否定:deny/negate
③解决:solve/settle
④缝:sew/stitch
情绪类
①伤心:sad/upset
②忧虑的:distressed/worried
【点睛】
[高分句型1]As soon as she sat down, she heard a girl laughing at her torn clothes.(由连接词as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]After saying that, mother took out the sewing bag and handed it to Ella, who took over the sewing bag and nodded to her mother.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.(2022·辽宁大连·模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was dark, cold and raining on December 24. James left his office and walked slowly across the street to the parking place. He was very tired. He took out his car key and put down his umbrella. He put the key into the lock and turned it. Nothing happened. The door would not open. Then James realised that it was the wrong car. His car was red, but this one was dark blue. “Oh dear! I must have parked in a different place this morning,” thought he. Putting up his umbrella, he set off to look for his car. The rain poured down and the evening got colder and colder.
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