为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good
黄绮珊涂惠源儿子learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
【优秀满分范文】How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have
some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but
don’t forget to do sports and k e ep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
为题，谈一下
2亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”
三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟； 2.词数80左右。
【优秀满分范文】
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many
memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to
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understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I want
to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher
carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I
made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
3父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适
当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出（不计入总词数）。
提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领带等：
2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情（do something that you can do），如为父亲准备一杯茶
等他下班后饮用等。
【优秀满分范文】
Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different
Fa ther’s
people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think
your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that
you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work,
he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day.
Don’t you think so?
为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
4请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”
提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日；
2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚；
3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友（friends and relatives）;
4.孩子们喜欢春节。
【优秀满分范文】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.
People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family
get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They
also visit their friends and relatives.
Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
5假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高
兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发；现在个子高多了，长发。
2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天；现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格：以前外向；现在有些内向。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥；
2.层次清晰，语言流畅；
3.80词左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has
long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes
playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a
little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the
best friends all the time.
6背景设定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来，想了解康明家乡的变化。
假如你是康敏，请根据以下提示，给Miachael回一封。
过去生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便......
现在生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及......
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；
3.词数80词左右，开头语以给出（不计入词数）。昆山电工培训
参考词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯)，telegram, thanks
to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Michael,
You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place
since 60 years ago.
In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the
roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families
couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with
their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living
conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their
own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile
phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min
7随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时
尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的
文章。
优点 1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。
2. 价格通常比较便宜。
3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。
缺点 1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。
2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；
2.80词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
【优秀满分范文】
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a
fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s
a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
8假如你是李华，今年上初三了，现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一
篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数：60-80。
【优秀满分范文】
小升初分数I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour
every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep
doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have
to spend all my free time studying.
I really miss my old days.
10某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2.你对这些问题的看法；
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my
friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much
attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own
decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want
me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with
them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.
10今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封，谈谈你将如何
与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：
什么是互质1. 表述你与母亲间的情感；
2. 为母亲制作一张卡片；
周杰伦昆凌3. 帮助母亲做点事；
4. 陪母亲散步等。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
阿哥阿妹
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother
and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help
her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m su be very happy.
What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
11英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷，成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表
分析它会时谁的。
要求：1.设想当时的情景，适当扩展细节；
2.书写工整，100词左右。
参考词汇：top student优等生；handwriting笔迹；full marks满分
【优秀满分范文】
we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.
Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy.
The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls
who are good at handwriting —Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does
well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.
12现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果，写一篇80词左右的短文。
kind reason
a few quiet music make them feel comfortable
many musicians who can write their own
cool
lyrics
most music that they can dance to full of energy
【优秀满分范文】
Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.
A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable.
Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the
music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.
13假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼
物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据
下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。
提示：1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物；
2.礼物的包装不要使用白或者黑包装纸（wrapping paper）；
3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。
要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚；
2.80词左右。（信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数）
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Linda,
I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.
Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your
teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your
teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese
when giving a gift.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Guo Jia
14刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob请教相
关礼仪。假设你是Bob，请你给John回一封，告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右，开
头已给出（不计入总词数）。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t t will feel uncomfortable.
First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember
not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you
are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to
stay long after dinner.
Good luck!
Yours,
Bob
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