上海历年中考英语作文试题大评析+预测白金版（汇编）
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2010上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself 上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself
1、What kind of person are you?
2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)
3、Why are you proud of yourself? 要求：至少60字 范文：
I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment, I just wanted to give up.but my parents encouraged me: “Impossible is nothing, ” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself,though I didn‟t get the good mark, I knew ,I wo
n.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
2009年上海中考英语作文试题评析
(以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写—篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
学生习作1 I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I don't think so.Our teacher said, “School is your home, you should keep it clean.”But I have never done anything to make school clean.For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean.Of course, I will do it with my classmates.We will make school clean every weekends next term as well.Now, do you think it is simple? 评析
此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。
全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。
李光洁前妻中考作文给力预测
假期利弊★范文2008年政府取消了五一黄金周（May golden week），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的自由论坛上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的 假期利弊
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2008年政府取消了“五一”黄金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的“自由论坛”上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的利与弊，并简述你的观点，给出一至两条理由。
AdvantagesDisadvantages
have a good rest
墓地怎么选
spend more time …with …
…cause a lot of trouble…
周杰伦夫妇秀恩爱be crowded everywhere…
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In 2008，„May golden week‟ was canceled，but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew „May golden week‟ or not.Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important.Firstly，we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work.Secondly，we could spend more time staying with our family.Thirdly，we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However，other people hold the opposite view.They think it causes a lot of problems.It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.As a student，I prefer a 7-day holiday.Not only can I sleep well and do exercise，but also I can read some interesting b
ooks.How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then！
公共规则
雨花茶属于什么茶★ 范文
It‟中秋的短信s not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places.Everyone should obey the rules.Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude.Remember not to do anything that might make other people uncomfortable.We should stand in line when we are waitiing for the bus.Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones.We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely.Especially，we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus.I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life.Please cherish the public property.使用手机
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关于中学生使用手机
赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。
河南工业大学高小淑
反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone.But some people do not think so.They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone.Because the students will use mobile phones to play games，sent text messages，watch movies，etc which will do harm to their study.And if a mobile phone ring in the class，the teacher and students would be disturbed.In my opinion，we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know，the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile ph
one is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention，so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there‟s a sudden accident，it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There‟re also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we‟re tired of our studies.In my opinion，it‟s not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.网络游戏