一：原文重现
“I just want a normal birthday party,” April told Bailey as they walked home from school.
Bailey knew what April meant. April’s parents loved the environment. And because April happened to be born on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme.
“Remember when you turned seven?” said Bailey.
“How could I forget the Throw-Out Blowout?” said April.
“We helped out at your garage sales and donated the money to charity. And when you ”
“It was a Tree Spree,” finished April. “We planted maples.” “Last year, we all collected newspapers to recycle,” said Bailey. “The Print Sprint.” April groaned.
Bailey giggled. “I thought it was fun.”
Later that night, as April loaded the dishwasher, she said, “I’d like to plan my own party this year.”
“Sure,” said Mom. “We could have a Composts Carnival.” “Great idea!” said Dad.
April cleared her throat. “I’d like to go to Maze Craze instead.” “Really?” said Dad, surprised.
“I guess we could do that. Dad and I can send you kids there.” said Mom.
April couldn’t wait for her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun. And they wouldn’t have to think one bit about the earth.
At school the next day, April told her friends. “I’m having my birthday party at Maze Craze!”
“You are?” said Josie. “But we always do something earthy on your birthday.” “Remember that salamander we found two years ago?” said Tyler. “Yeah,” said April. “This year, we’re not even going outside.”
“Oh!” said Tyler.
The following weekend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze. “Thanks for coming,” said April. “I’ve been so excited about my party. No shovels.
No collecting recyclables. Nothing earthy about it.” She shifted her feet. “Then I got here this morning and saw this parking lot.”
April’s friends glanced around. Plastic bottles bounced across the ground. Newspapers and fast-food sacks blocked the storm drain. Shopping bags rustled in the trees.
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“What a mess!” April frowned.
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April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled.
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了April过生日疯狂迷宫玩时，看到外面很多垃圾，于是建议朋友们先捡垃圾，他们为参加生日聚会而穿的整洁衣服被汗水湿透了。但他们的脸上洋溢着满意的神情，能为地球做点事的感觉真好。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘真是一团糟!’April皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写April建议朋友们先捡垃圾，描述他们捡垃圾的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“April看着收集的垃圾笑了”可知，第二段可描写April对捡垃圾的感受以及朋友们的反应。
2.续写线索：April皱眉——April建议捡垃圾——大家设法捡垃圾——April和朋友们感觉为地
球做点事真好
3.词汇激活
行为类
渴望：long for/desire
支持：approve/ support
努力做某事：make great efforts to do sth./ take pains to do sth.
情绪类
困难：difficult / rough
良好：good / great
得分句型
1：Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. (运用了though引导让步状语从句)
2：How about picking the trash first? (运用了动名词作宾语)
三：续写单句训练
1.“多么糟！”阿普丽尔皱了皱眉头。
2.虽然她一直渴望一个非地球日的生日，但很难对这样的混乱视而不见。
3.她转过身来对朋友们说：“先捡垃圾怎么样？”
4.她的提议很快得到了其他人的批准，很快他们就成功了。
5.艾普丽尔的妈妈从后备箱里拿了一些手套，而她爸爸设法取出了树里的购物袋。
forget6.艾普丽尔和贝利拿着这些袋子收集了散落的瓶子。
7.在下水道旁，乔西和泰勒竭尽全力清除了堵塞物。
8.许多人都能动手轻松地干活。
9.不久之后，三个袋子里装满了罐子和报纸，以供回收利用。
10.阿普丽尔看着收集到的垃圾，笑了笑。然后她抬头看着她的朋友们。
11.他们参加生日派对的整洁衣服浑身湿透，但他们的脸上却很满意。
12.为地球做些事感觉很好。
13.“大家，地球日快乐，”April说。“现在我们准备好迎接迷宫大火了。”“April生日快乐！”她的朋友们喊道。
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