It was a hot day in Florida. The school year had just ended and it was time for summer vacation. We had just gotten a little black dog who we named OneEyed. We chose that name because he could only see out of one eye.
Everybody wanted to do something for the dog: feed him, teach him tricks and take long walks with him. Everybody was so happy to have this active, playful and shaggy new addition to our family. Everybody, that is, except my mom and me.
狗界高考毕业生All my mom saw when she looked at the dog was someone else to clean up after. Shedding, messy, muddy, he pounced all over the house. All Mom seemed to care about was getting the house cleaned. My mom began to put Clorox(高乐氏漂白水)in the bathtub. There was no messing with Mom when she started cleaning, so I decided to move out of the way, Actually, getting out of the way is a move I'd been practicing for a long time.
Being the youngest in my family has had its advantages, of course. More than a few times I
was spoiled or everyone said I was the cutest. But being the youngest also came with its fair share of troubles. “You're too young!”“You'll mess this up!” they'd often say. I knew that my family loved me but I couldn't wait to show them I could do things by myself.
Every time I asked my brother or my sister if I could pet OneEyed, they would shout, “No!” or tell me that I had germs and if I touched OneEyed he would die! I really believed them. Once I even confessed to my mom that I touched the dog when no one noticed. At first, my mom seemed very confused about what I was telling her, but then she realized. My mom scolded my brother and sister, “You better stop teasing your little brother!” Little brother! That's exactly what I was. That really got my blood boiling! Secretly, I decided, “I'll show them what a little kid can do!”
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Paragraph1: That afternoon, I took the dog and sneaked into the bathroom.
Paragraph 2: I thought my mom would punish me, but she was just standing there and laughing.
官方范文，
That afternoon, I took the dog and sneaked into the bathroom. "I'm going to give you a bath!" I announced. OneEyed looked at me strangely, obviously not understanding what I was saying. I took my sister's shampoo and poured the whole bottle into the bathtub. Then I coaxed the dog in and started scrubbing the dirt off him with our towels. However, things quickly got messy. Soap and water splashed everywhere; bubbles floated like tiny, soapy snowflakes. One Eyed shook himself vigorously and barked excitedly, soon turning the bathroom into a wet battleground. It should have been my secret mission, but now, it turned into a disaster! Panicking, I ran out to seek help, only to find my mom at the door.
I thought my mom would punish me, but she was just standing there and laughing. "Well, well, what do we have here?" she chuckled, wiping away tears of laughter. I stammered, admitting everything. Instead of scolding me, she bent down and gave me a gentle hug, "I k
new you just want to help. "Straightening up, she suggested, "Now shall we clean up the mess together, young man?" "Yes, ma'am!" I nodded. Even though we never actually had a conversation about my being the youngest, I think Mom understood I was trying to make my own place in our family. Bathing the dog might not sound like a Declaration of Independence, but for a sixyearold, well, it was my best shot!
参考范文一，
That afternoon, I took the dog and sneaked into the bathroom. I tried to clean it because mom always plained how exhausted she was whenever cleaning the dog. Following my mom’s steps, I poured a lot of shampoo over OneEyed and rubbed it. However, OneEyed thought it was a play, so it licked my hands and threw itself on my shoulder, wailing its tail madly and barking happily. Now, the water spilt over the bathtub and the bubbles were everywhere. What’s worse, my clothes were all wet and some bottles were knocked down with big crashes. “No, OneEyed, be nice. We’re having a shower!” Patting and shooing, I tried to calm it down, but it became more active. Suddenly, I found mom at the door.
I thought my mom would punish me, but she was just standing there and laughing. “Are you trying to help me? Thanks for doing me a big favor.” Mom beamed, then she crunched and kissed me on my forehead. “You’re the first to help me bath the dog! Thank you. ” At that moment, a mix of shame and pride washed over me, shameful for not helping mom ever and proud for being the first to do it. Little as I was, I felt I was big enough to share the burden for my mom. When my mom told my siblings what I had done, they volunteered to help share the house chores. Although they still called me “the little brother”, I thought they showed some respect to me, because I set a good example of helping mom.
参考范文二，
That afternoon, I took the dog and sneaked into the bathroom. I felt a bit nervous, knowing that my mom would not be pleased to find me there with OneEyed. However, I was determined to prove that even a little kid like me could take care of the new family member. I grabbed a towel and carefully began to wash OneEyed, trying my best not to make a mess. The little black dog, surprisingly, seemed to enjoy the bath, wagging his tail and spla
shing water everywhere. I couldn't help but giggle as I realized that maybe I could handle responsibilities on my own. Suddenly, I sensed something and found mom was by the door.
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