2006年大作文
近朱者赤近墨者黑
2006年短文写作还是图画作文。给了两幅画面,一幅是一个人脸上刻着贝克汉姆的名字,另一幅是一个人花了300元剪了一个小贝的发型,两幅图均透露出社会上一些人崇拜偶像的现象,让考生对这种现象做出评价,很新鲜、灵活。感觉以往的英语作文试题大多考传统型的,如孝敬父母,毅力恒心等,这次让人很意外。
考生在看到大作文的第一眼是感觉亲切而高兴,觉得非常有趣,很有东西写。因为贝克汉姆对年轻人来说,实在是太熟悉太有诱惑力了,小贝的出场,无论对男生女生,通常引起的都是狂热与奔放。但是此时要静下心来,逻辑严密、条理清晰、有条不紊地去论述一下偶像崇拜的问题,很多考生马上又坐不住板凳了。要么提笔忘字,要么干脆无话可言,再或者干巴巴说几句就再也不能继续下去。其实,文章探讨的主题应该是当今社会出现的年轻人对明星盲目崇拜的现象。只要围绕这个主题写就行,至于从哪个角度去讨论,自己的具体看法是什么,那不是最重要的。关键是考生的文章观点要明确而清晰,尤其是,词句的表达要流畅规范。
图画作文通常写法:第一段揭示现象,描述图画;第二段发表自己对这个现象的分析议论;第三段针对该现象提出自己的看法或发出自己的倡导。可写性很强。
回复:剖析2006年考研英语作文真题
二、经典范文赏析
Part B 范文
There are two pictures:The first is a photo of a man’s face on which the name of the famous football player Beckham can be seen. In the second picture we can see a man in a barbershop, his hair being done in Beckham’s hair style, costing him 300 yuan.
购二手房注意事项 Obviously,the two persons are fans of Beckham.These pictures, although a little exaggerating and satirical at first glance, can make us ponder: why does this phenomenon appear?As is known to all, with the development of modern communications, more and more people are influenced by some socalled “stars”. Therefore,we have many fans who run after and imitate them-film stars,athletic stars, even stars of supergirl singers. First,they do so because they admire them and want to
obtain their fame and reputation. Second, although there is no denying the fact that some people do this out of pure adiration, yet, some just want to become wealthy overnight-without hard work, without sweat, just effortlessly.
演员杜鹃 Anyway, in my opinion, our government must educate our people-especially the youth-that some famous people get their reputation because they have made great contribution to our society-such as Liu Xiang. And we ourselves also must understand that their achievement is not easy job. We’d better turn our admiration into practical action to learn from them so that we can make even greater contribution to our country in the future.
译文
这里有两幅图:第一张是一个人脸上写着著名足球运动员贝克汉姆的名字。第二张我们可以看见一个人在理发店里,他让理发师按照贝克汉姆的发型给他做头发,花了300元。
很明显,这两人是贝克汉姆的崇拜者。这些图片,尽管第一眼看上去有些夸张和讽刺,仍然可以使我们深思:为什么会发生这种现象?众所周知的是:随着现代传媒的发展,越来
越多的人都被这样的“明星”影响。因此,有很多追随和模仿他们的追星族——电影明星,体育明星,甚至“超女”歌星。第一,他们这样做是因为他们崇拜他们,想得到他们的名声。第二,尽管不可否认的是一些人这么做纯粹是出于崇拜,但是,也有一些人只是想一夜暴富——不需努力工作,不需流汗,只是无需努力。
以我的观点,无论如何,我们的政府都必须教育人民——尤其是年轻人—— 一些著名的人得到他们的声誉是因为他们为我们的社会做出了巨大贡献——比如刘翔。我们自己必须理解他们的成就是不容易的。我们最好将我们的崇拜转化为学习他们的实际行动,这样我们才能在将来为我们国家做出更大的贡献。
黄金句型
These pictures, although a little exaggerating and satirical at first glance, can make
这些图片,尽管第一眼看上去有些夸张和讽刺,仍然可以使我们深思……
As is known
众所周知的是……
Although there is no denying the
尽管不可否认的是……
范文(新东方)
Many things make people think the younger generation are weird and the most extreme may be [1] their idolatry fever. As is vividly depicted in the left picture, a man has had David Beckham’s name written on his face, while in the right picture, a man is having his hair cut in Beckham’s model, for which he pays 300RMB.
电脑为什么会自动关机薛之谦说的主持人是谁The phenomenon of idolatry has been known for years [2] in today’s China. Our younger generation’s heroes are athletes, entertainers, and movie stars, but not scholars or other inspirational celebrities. What’s more, they admire them in a wrong way. Relevant examples are not difficult to find. “Super Girls”, a singing contest sweeping the country, witnessed the insane behaviors of pop fans. Sometimes it goes too far. [3] A girl named Y
ang Lijuan forced her father to sell a kidney by threatening to commit suicide, to get travelling expenses to travel all the way to Hong Kong to see Andy Lau, a famous Hong Kong movie and singing star. This highly publicized event has caused heightened concern about idol worship. Some parents frown when they complain [4] that the blind worship distracts their children’s attention from school activities and leads them to drop out and run wild [5] . If they continue along this path [6] , it will seriously affect their studies and career.
There is nothing wrong [7] for one to have his own role model. However, if young people adore the stars to the extent of losing their self-control, they misunderstand the meaning of popular culture. After all, blindly following other’s footsteps is one thing; developing your own idea about popular culture, which is more meaningful, is something else. [8] Only when juveniles regard those stars rationally, can they benefit from their role models. [9]
第一段
说明主题(the young generation’s idolatry fever)
描述图画(a man with the word of “Beckham” on his face and another man who is having his hair cut in Beckham’s model)
第二段: 阐述图画意图
盲目崇拜的现象
“超级女声”(“Super Girls”)
“杨丽娟”事件(force her father to sell a kidney)
盲目崇拜的影响
前任3插曲叫什么影响学业(have a bad influence on their school activities)
变得无法管教(lead them to run wild)
第三段: 发表观点
青年一代有自己的偶像无可厚非(there is nothing wrong for the young generation to have their own role models)
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