Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why.
14 point
Known as the Oriental Pearl, Shanghai has not only the prosperous economy but also the unique culture of its own. If a foreign friend of mine would visit my hometown, Shanghai, I strongly recommend him to visit Yu Garden.
Yu Garden best exhibits the traditional culture of Shanghai. Located in downtown and surrounded by skyscrapers, Yu Garden consists of traditional architectures of Shanghai, which are most two-floor houses.
I will take him around the market in Yu Garden to watch the amazing skills of traditional craftsmen and recommend him to buy some handcrafts with Chinese painting or calligraphy. As for the meal, he can try the steamed bun, a specialty of Shanghai. Undoubtedly he will be fascinated by the delicious taste.
As a Shanghainese, I take pride in introducing the culture of my hometown to foreign friends. I firmly believe that Shanghai will stand and shine when facing the challenges of western cultures. I hope the visit to Yu Garden will give my friend some new insight into the culture of Shanghai.
11 point
四级作文多少分 If a friend of mine ever comes to visit my hometown, Tengwang Ge is certainly the place I’ll take him to.
To begin with, Tengwang Ge is the symbol of my hometown. It was built in Tang Dynasty and has been kept very well. Many famous poets, such as Wang bo, enjoyed the great view there and created significant art works. That is what make Tengwang Ge even more special. Moreover, this old building was reconstructed during the past ten years. As a result
it has become more attractive to the tourists. Standing at the tope of Tengwang Ge, you can see the Gan River flow towards the sea in front of you. Different kinds of birds fly high in the sky. Skyscrapers form a “forest” across the river and all kinds of business is booming there.
Tengwang Ge is not only a historical site but also a symbol in my hometown. I hope my friends will love it just like I do.
8 point
I am so excited to hear about my foreign friend is coming to visit my hometown. My hometown is Liyang, although it is very small, I am so sure that he will have a good time there.
The most interesting place I would like to take him to see is Tianmu lake. There are several reasons should be responsible for it. Firstly, it is a very beautiful place of some flowers, small lakes and small animals are so clever. Secondly, I will take him to taste the h
ead of fish there, it is well known all over the country. Only a famous people come here he taste it. Last but not the least, he could enjoy him in the nature. There are fresh air, clean lakes, high mountions and clever people round Tianmu lake.
From the point of my view, all of these reasons will interst him, and I fully convince he will never forget this visit in Tianmu lake.
8分档有语言错误，但不算严重。该档次学生不能像上两个档次可以自如的用英语表达自己的思想，写的有的句子是只有中国老师才看的懂的中式英语，想用一些地道的表达却又记不准或用不准，给人磕磕绊绊的感觉。8分档是马马虎虎。
5 point
My hometown is Yu Yan with a beautiful mountains. Whenever a foreign friend is coming, I must take him to there. The air is much better than in city. And there are no noise. So I love there. In the summer, it’s so hot that you are difficult to stay here, you can chose there for you free time. And there are many interesting activities, likes dance with many frie
nds, playing basketball, you will never feel boring there, you also can climb the mountains, when you get into the top, you can see the most beautiful signs. You will never forget it. The food that I think you will must like it. Although you maybe not suit for it. One weeks later, you will like them. It’s so delicious. The people who live there, that are friendly with everybody. So you can make many new friends there. They will share many interesting things with you. I think you love there. And you will have a fun with there.
5分档跟8分档最明显的差别就是语言错误多，且不少是严重的语言错误，例如谓语错误：两个动词连着一起用，主谓不一致。这档次学生基本是下笔就是错——游走在英语语言规则周围的错误。内容、思想上也很无力。5分档是稀里糊涂。
2 point
My name is Cathy, a sunshine girl. I was born in shanghai. I am very very love my hometown.
One day, the weather is very hot. Suppose a foreign of mine is coming to visit my hometown.
Morning, I and my friend go to Lujiazui station. Our look at Dongfangmingzhu and Ocean park. It is take us three hours to do it. In the eating of the time, we go to Xiao nan guo. Some time later, we go to nanjing Road. It is very people to go to there. There have many more popular things and eating.
Now, the time was 5 clock. We go to Huanhai Road. Some people ask me “why go to there.” I said “there are very popular buildings and roads, we can buy something our love at there.” My friends said “Oh, I like.”
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