【考题再现】
其次节：写作(总分值30分)
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发，询问你暑假里的准备，但你因预备期末考试未能准时回复。请依据以下要点给他回邮件：
1. 未准时回复的缘由;
2. 你假期的准备(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
留意： 1. 次数：120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面表达题目连续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以赔礼信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于10年山东卷(赔礼信)和07年四川卷(
假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平常常常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的方法，把握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应当不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的
其次段：“赔礼”局部(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段：“假期安排”局部
第四段：补充说明+客套话
【高分范文】
Dear Tom,
山东高考时间表安排2022How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)
How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(其次段为赔礼信常见套路)
By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I
will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3) These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)
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