1.审题
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the saying “Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.”You should write at lest 150 words but no more than 200 words.
（1）写作话题：精神财富是唯一真正的财富
（2）写作任务：论述精神财富的重要性
六级作文通常是正能量阐述，写作时应更多阐释这句名言警句给我们个人和社会带来的积极影响、重要性、好处等等。
2.搭建作文框架
怎么写（语言） 功能句型
主体段写什么（内容） 关键词
开头段：第1句 引出名言警句（表层描写）
功能句型1：As the old saying goes,”_____”. 俗话说：……
例句：As the old proverb says,”Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.”
功能句型2：There is a famous saying that goes/proverb that says,”_____.”有一句名言说：……
例句：There is a famous saying that goes,”Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.”
开头段：第2句 揭示深层含义（深层描写）
功能句型1：The old saying/proverb aims at telling us about_____.这句古老的名言旨在告诉我们……
the importance/significance of 重要性
the real meaning of 真正含义
the great value of 巨大价值
the true essence of 真谛
例句：The old proverb aims at telling us about the significance of being spiritually rich （the wealth of the mind同义替换）.
功能句型2：The purpose of the saying/proverb is to show us _____.这句名言的目的是要向我们表明……
例句：The purpose of the saying is to show us the significance of being spiritually rich.
主体段 论述重要性（2-3点）
先把抽象的名词具体化：
（1）精神财富是什么？代表智慧、才能、创造力等→个人层面：更好地创造物质财富
（3）精神财富有什么好处？每个人都拥有精神财富→社会层面：社会越来越和谐
思路：一是这个东西是什么；二是对个人有什么好处；三是对社会有什么好处。
主体段：第1句 主题句
功能句型1：This point can mainly be proved by the following facts. 这一论点主要可以由以下事实证明。
功能句型2：There are several strong arguments for this point.有几个强有力的论据来支持
这一论点。
主体段：第2句
重要性1 智慧、才能、创造力等→更好地创造物质财富
represent wisdom, ability, creativity and so on
have a better chance to create material wealth
In the first place, wealth of the mind represents wisdom, ability, creativity and so on. Those who have rich spiritual wealth will have better chances to create material wealth.
首先，精神财富代表着智慧、才能、创造力等。那些拥有丰富精神财富的人将有更好的机会创造物质财富。
补充：例如，科学家们拥有丰富的科学知识，就能创造出很多伟大的发明。
For example, scientists have rich scientific knowledge, so they can create many great inventions.
For example, scientists who have rich scientific knowledge can create many great inventions.
主体段：第3句
重要性2 不变的；不能被剥夺→物质财富可能会消失
never change; unchangeable; changeless不变的
stable; eternal; permanent稳定的、不朽的
deprive/take away剥夺
can never be deprived/taken away不能被剥夺
Material wealth is likely to disappear物质财富可能会消失
Furthermore, sspiritual wealth is unchangeable and it can never be taken away form its owners.On the contrary, material wealth is likely to disappear.
此外，精神财富是不变的，永远不能从拥有它的人那里夺走。相反，物质财富可能会消失。
补充：物质财富会在什么情况下或者因为哪些原因会消失呢？
因为一些严重的自然灾害以及不幸的意外，物质财富可能会消失。
On the contrary, material wealth is likely to disappear because of some serious natural disasters and unfortunate accidents.
主体段：第4句
重要性3 每个人都拥有精神财富→社会越来越和谐（憧憬和设想）
Everyone has spiritual wealth/everyone is rich in spirit
Become more and more harmonious
More importantly, if everyone is rich in spirit, our society will become more and more harmonious.
最重要的是，如果每个人都拥有丰富的精神财富，我们的社会将会变得越来越和谐。
结尾段：第1句 重申观点
功能句型1：As discussed above, we could conclude that_____.
如上所述，我们可以得出这样的结论：……
例句：As discussed above, we could conclude that wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
如上所述，我们可以得出这样的结论：精神财富是唯一真正的财富。
功能句型2：From what has been discussed above, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion that _____.
综上所述，我们有理由得出这样的结论：……
例句：From what has been discussed above, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion that wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
综上所述，我们有理由得出这样的结论：精神财富是唯一真正的财富。
From what has been discussed above, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion that wealth of the mind is of great importance and it has brought a lot of benefits to us and to our society.
综上所述，我们有理由得出这样的结论：精神财富非常的重要，它给我们个人以及社会都带来了很多的好处。
结尾段：第2句 提出建议措施
建议措施类功能句型
What sb. should do is to _____.某人应该做某事。
For sb. ,it is suggested that _____.对于某人而言，建议做某事。
Sb. Should give priority to_____.某人应该优先考虑什么。
英语六级作文范文
例句：Therefore,What we should do is to create our own spiritual wealth as much as possible.
因此，我们应该要尽可能地去创造属于自己的精神财富。
名言警句型作文完整范文
There is a famous saying that goes,”Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.”The old proverb aims at telling us about the significance of being spiritually rich.（表层描写+深层描写）
This point can mainly be proved by the following facts. In the first place, wealth of the mind represents wisdom, ability, creativity and so on. Those who have rich spiritual wealth will have better chances to create material wealth.For example, scientists who have rich scientific knowledge can create many great inventions.Furthermore, sspiritual wealth is unchangeable and it can never be taken away form its owners.On the contrary, material wealth is likely to disappear because of some serious natural disasters and unfortunate acc
idents. More importantly, if everyone is rich in spirit, our society will become more and more harmonious.（主题句+重要性）
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