课程代码：00597
Revise the following sentences according to the requirement. Example: The history of English words is the history of our civilization in many ways. (Periodic sentence)
In many ways, the history of English words is the history of our civilization.
停车费管理1. The enemy ran away as soon as they saw our flag. (simple sentence)
答案：
The enemy ran away at the sight of our flag.
2. A high mountain stands in the east. A large river flows in the west. (compound sentence)
答案：
A high mountain stands in the east, and a large river flows in the west.
3. At last my wish is realized. The government has granted me permission to go to the West. (complex sentence)
答案：
At last my wish is realized because the government has granted me permission to go to the West.
4. Jun Ji Hyun (全智贤), a South Korean actress, has earned the adoration of the and audiences. She presents an honest, flawed character beautifully in the film Sassy. (compound-complex sentence)
答案：
Jun Ji Hyun is a South Korean actress, and she has earned the adoration of the audiences because
she presents an honest, flawed character beautifully in the film Sassy.
5. Iraq’s fallen dictator Saddam Hussein refused to answer any questions or recognize any of his crimes when he was brought to court. (Periodic sentence)答案：
When he was brought to court, Iraq’s fallen dictator Saddam Hussein refused to answer any questions and recognize any of his crimes.
6. Former American President, Ronald Reagan, died at the age of 83(1911-2004). He was the oldest president in American history. (long sentence)
答案：
Former American President, Ronald Reagan, who was the oldest president in American history, died at the age of 83(1911-2004).
7. He learned how to categorize and draw animals accurately. (Parallel structure)答案：
He learned how to categorize and how to draw animals accurately.
8. The men of the expedition put their faith in Washington’s leadership after they were completely out of touch with their families for over two years. (periodic sentence)李易峰老婆是赵丽颖
答案：
After they were completely out of touch with their families for over two years, the men of the expedition put their faith in Washington’s leadership.
9. The store had the outdoor grill I wanted. The clerk wouldn’t sell it to me. It was the food sample. (compound-complex sentence)
答案：
The store had the outdoor grill I wanted, but the clerk wouldn’t sell it to me because it was the food sample.
10.The tall hedge muffled (减弱) the noise. The hedge surrounded my house. (complex sentence)
答案：
The tall hedge that surrounded my house muffled the noise.
Ⅱ.改写病句（15 points, 3 points each）
Correct the errors in the following sentences.
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After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television, I resolved never
to buy that brand again.
11. To keep the girl students interested in getting in shape, an exercise program was set up for the summer months.
答案：
To keep the girl students interested in getting in shape, the coaching staff/we set up an exercise program for the summer months.
12. Although the season has not yet begun has caused the public to get overly anxious for information about the team.
答案：
Although the season has not yet begun, the public is overly anxious for information about the team.
13. Daisy was an adult, married, and had a young daughter.
答案：
Daisy was an adult, a married woman, and the mother of a young daughter.
14. The reason for Holden’s disappointment being that his sister wasn’t there to comfort him.
答案：
The reason for Holden’s disappointment was that his sister wasn’t there to comfort him.
15. She paid five dollars for a dress at the county fair that she wanted.
答案：
She paid five dollars at the county fair for a dress that she wanted.
Ⅲ.标出主题句（本大题共3小题，每小题5分，共15分）
16. Choose the best topic sentence from the group below. Write the choice in the blank.
A. In later adulthood, we begin to come to terms with our own mortality.
B. There are various stages of human development.
C. Adolescence is typically a time of identity crisis.
D. Psychologists report that we pass through various stages of development throughout our lives.
Answer:
【答案】D
17. Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence.
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What has happened to the American male? For a long time, he seemed utterly confident in his manhood, sure of his masculine (男性的) role in society, easy and definite in his sense of sexual identity. The frontiersmen(边远地区居民) of James Fenimore Cooper, for example, never had any concern about masculinity; they were men, and it did not occur to them to think twice about it. Even well into the twentieth century, the heroes of Dreiser, of Fitzgerald, of Hemingway remain men. But one begins to detect a new theme emerging in some of these authors, especially in Hemingway: the theme of the male hero increasingly preoccupied with proving his virility (男子气概) to himself. And by mid-century, the male role had plainly lost its rugged clarity of outline. Today men are more and more conscious of maleness not as a fact but as a problem. The ways by which American men affirm their masculinity are uncertain and obscure. There are multiplying signs, indeed, that something has gone badly wrong with the American male’s conception of himself.
答案：
There are multiplying signs, indeed, that something has gone badly wrong with the American male’s conception of himself.
火箭队教练18. Read the following paragraph carefully and select the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph.
Topic Sentence:
“Music,” the teacher would tell his pupils, “is a state of being. It is not so much
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