【篇一：2013年上海市初三英语一模作文】
长宁
as we all know, happiness is one of the most important things in our lives. therefore, learning how to be happy is becoming more and more useful to us. and here is some advice for us to be happy people.
in the first place, keep ourselves healthy. only when we have health bodies, we can enjoy a lot of interesting things and be in a good mood. in the second place, we need to put our heart into the things that we are doing. as long as we fix our mind on our work, we will find happiness in it and know that happiness is just around us. most important of all enjoy the life every day instead of complaining of how hard it is. follow my advice, and soon you will find that you are just in happiness.
崇明
the spring festival is coming and i have made a detailed plan for it. in this winter holiday, i want to polish my english. compared with some top students’ english, my english is not very good in my class. if want to catch up with them, i must take advantage of this holiday to fill the gap between them and me. still, i also want to visit my grandparents in sichuan, who are very old now and have given me a
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love and care. i think it will refresh me to stay with them for a while.
静安区
today, i interviewed jenny, chief editor of our school newspaper. jenny is an active girl who has various interests including dancing. no wonder (难怪) she looks so healthy and is in a good shape.
费玉清哥哥 jenny’s parents has a great influence on her because both of them are famous writers. when she was a little child, she had an ambition to be a world famous write
r. because of her hard work, jenny won an award in writing in 2010. now she is working for our school newspaper. her articles always appear on the first page of each issue(of newspaper). jenny, an ambitious girl, is really a promising writer around us. 徐汇区
i quite agree with eric schmidt on his advice. i think we should put down the devices in our hands and go back to the real world at once.
nowadays, with the fast development of science and technology, more and more electronic devices are coming into our life and people also are spending more and more time on them. take my own experience as an example. last
att解锁week, i invited my classmates to celebrate my birthday party, but at the party, almost all of them were using their electronic products to surf the internet, play games, or write blogs. what a shame it was! if we could stay away from the electronic devices and have more time to talk face-to-face with our friends and parents, what a wonderful life it would be!
普陀区
dear classmates，
as proverb goes, books are the ladder of human’s progress. however in our class, most of you, unlike top students, often play computer games instead of reading books during your spare time. there are many advantages of reading books, on one hand it can eich our knowledge that can’t be learned from classes, on the other hand, it will open our mind to the wider outside world. in my opinion, reading is just like making friends, few but good. all in all, as junior school students, we should get into the good habit of reading books every day.
宝山
it a common belief that we can’t depend on our parents forever, therefore, my viewpoint is that we should go to a boarding school,
first of all, we can learn to be independent if we study in a boarding
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school and therefore our parents will not worry about us so much in the future life. what’s more, we can make friends and push ahead the friendship in such an environment. in a word, it all depends on ourselves whether we should go or not.
2018假期>鹿晗结婚照 a recent survey shows that 70% of the students have so much homework that they have to burn the midnight oil to finish it. this, however, has done harm to teenagers’ health. undoubtedly, a certain amount of homework can help enhance their study at school. but with too much homework, students tend to get anxious and tired. also, they are easy to feel sleepy because of the lack of sleeping time. as a result, they can’t get focused in class. therefore, instead of doing loads of homework, students should be given more time to do outdoor activities and develop their interests and hobbies. thus, they can be healthy both physically and mentally.
作文解析：黄浦区作文还是以议论文为思路。当然出题还是在学生可写的可控范围，不离生活和学习。但是要以辩证性的思维写出作业多少以及对自己生活学习的影响，这对学生
稍许有些挑战。议论文的思路也可以借鉴我们读写课上老师讲的以数据引入话题。再阐述现象，以及现象带来的结果，最后再总结自己的观点，适当升华主题。因此，对广大学员来说，挑战之一就是如何避免假大空的论点，不要千篇一律的i think进行所谓的“老干部发言”，是非常重要的。
范文解析：开篇数据例证，说明heavy homework带来的直观影响：“do harm to”;进一步阐述作业量过多造成的危害，在表达时，语句之间的连贯性和逻辑性是非常重要的，因此，这里的undoubtedly, also, therefore, but, thus,等等都是过渡或者深入文章表达的必备的方法。当然，这需要平时积极的练习，只有在平时磨，才会临阵不慌。文采分词汇分享： burn the midnight oil ；do harm to, enhance, tend do, lack of, 最后的physically and mentally也是押韵词，读上去朗朗上口，给人印象深刻
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eric schmidt, google chairman, made a speech at boston university and gave some meaningful advice to the students, asking them to stay away from electronic devices and to have more time to talk face-to-face with their friends and parents.
eric schmidt谷歌公司主席在波士顿大学的演讲中建议学生不要沉迷于电子设备二要留出更多时间和朋友家长面对面交谈。请你就eric schmidt的建议结合你或者你身边同学朋友的实际情况谈谈你的看法。 suggested questions：
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