2023年12月英语四级写作总分值作文精选
2023年12月英语四级写作总分值作文精选
作文一：
题目要求：
Directions: Write a position entitled On Disasters. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
2. 面对灾难，我们应该坚强，不要过于沉湎于悲哀，要积极面对人生。
四级满分3. 我的看法。
参考范文：
On Disasters
An old saying goes: Life is full of roses and thorns. As we all know, one’s life is full of unexpected events, some of which are wonderful and some of which are disastrous. Those heavy blows, such as, floods, snowstorms, and earthquakes, threaten to weigh one down.
However、it’s even worse if one can’t drag himself out of the grief in that mental break-down is more serious than the disaster itself. Instead of indulging oneself in sadness, one should take positive attitude towards life and contribute to the reconstruction of his or her life and hometown.
作文二：
Pickpocketing
Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. While waiting for a bus, a woman took her wallet out and paid for a newspaper at a nearby newspaper booth,. After putting her wallet back into her handbag she began to look through the new titles when a
middle-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”. Swiftly, her wallet was in the man’s hand.
The crazy pickpocketing has bee a national epidemic and poses a grave threat to the residents’ and visitors’ property safety. Pickpocketing prevention, which is a tough task for police, makes senses. All sides involved in this problem must join their efforts to remove this social cancer.
Everyone shares the huge responsibility for demonstrating their justice at proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious society.
点评
描绘一次亲眼目睹的事实，一次引出全文的主题。Witness用词准确。Brush此处为动词，说明小偷推挤的动作想说子拂过般既轻又快，描绘生动形象。含有挖苦意味的'Swiftly与句中的动词brush照应，自然承接前一句。
指出扒窃行为的危害，crazy，National epidemic和poses a grave threat to等词表现出此危
害的严重性。Tough和句中的比喻social cancer意在谴责此类卑劣行径。
最后两句话呼吁大家携手努力，消除扒窃，共建和谐社会，点明文章主题。
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