英语六级作文范文
作文题目：团队精神及沟通在工作中的重要性
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of team spirit and communication in the workplace. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
One of the problems both people and corporation face today is self-isolation and information loss, and many feel there is a great need for team spirit and communication. I believe that working together and communicating with each other offer the best solution to the world’s pressing matters.
Firstly, team spirit and communication help to deal with information loss. A group share information by working together and communication. Among all the touching facts relating to this topic, the most impressive one is Bill Gates and Allen. Without teamwork and communication, how could it be possible for Microsoft corporation to achieve success? Second, team spirit and communication are beneficial to staff who do not have opportunity to speak all day long staring at the PC. Working with others gives them a chance to speak and prevent their speaking skills from deteriorate. More importantly, team spirit and communication help to create an amicable working atmosphere. By consulting problems with others, the
moderate and friendly atmosphere is thus created.
Overall, team spirit and communication is beneficial in that they eliminate barriers to information loss, and improve the relationship between colleagues as well as the working atmosphere. Team spirit and communication are therefore an essential measure, the effects of which will be felt far and wide.
【解析】
本篇作文属于话题类作文，要求我们就团队精神及沟通在工作中的重要性写一篇作文。像这类话题类作文，我们可以在第一段引出这个话题，并表明自己的态度。然后在第二段具体论证团队精神和沟通在工作中的重要性，我们可以分一下领域，比如工作相关的问题本身，员工个人能力，工作氛围等，来论证团队合作和沟通对工作的重要性，最后在第三段进行总结，并把第二段中论证的三个优点整理并简要提及即可。
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